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Friday Flash Fiction: The Second One | Post-Apocalyptic Publishing — Wed, 12 May 2010 16:40:12 +0000

[...] This Friday Flash is a sequel to The First One. [...]

Miladysa — Wed, 12 May 2010 16:28:24 +0000

rofl Awesome

“Listen, you droplet of troll sweat”

I am sooo going to *use* that the next time someone gets on my wick!

Donna Carrick — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 16:03:12 +0000

The very reason I seldome waste my energy on ‘wishes’ — ha ha. It’s an old Asian curse: May you get exactly what you wish for. Well done! Donna

The Razors Edge — Fri, 26 Feb 2010 03:47:58 +0000

Excellent, I was hooked and couldn’t stop reading.

Clive Martyn — Sun, 21 Feb 2010 21:06:19 +0000

Excellent well done.

Chris Chartrand — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 01:41:28 +0000

Sorry I’m late joining the party. This is really something great. I can’t wait to see what else you have in store for us.
~chris

Jodi Cleghorn — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 00:27:35 +0000

Loving your twisted fairy tale take on an old classic. The final line is a knife twister… now onwards and upwards to the next installment.

Kate — Fri, 12 Feb 2010 13:03:20 +0000

“a redhead who was seventy per cent legs, thirty per cent Gucci”

I love this!

Actually, I love all of it.

Laura Eno — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 14:55:38 +0000

Ha! Spiteful fairies – love it! Great tale.

~Tim — Tue, 09 Feb 2010 01:57:34 +0000

I really enjoyed the insults too. What a fun story.