Comments on: Friday Flash: The Delivery

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Wed, 12 May 2010 16:15:39 +0000

LOL Now I wasn’t expecting that! Well done

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 12:36:23 +0000

coathanger man and come in from the nether!
Excellent stuff, and I’m loving this world.
Poor Cob though, that’s quite a harsh punishment for a misdelivery!

By: Kate

Kate — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 12:01:15 +0000

Loving this series!

By: Cascade Lily

Cascade Lily — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:39:05 +0000

Excellent, excellent, excellent Emma. Love the coat hanger man and the description of the sky. What a lot of world you’ve fit into 1000w!

By: Emeric

Emeric — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 04:54:34 +0000

I think that your writing is really breezy. I stumbled upon your blog and I thought of reading the first paragraph of your latest post but I ended up reading the whole story. I think that you should seriously write a novel and submit it for a made for movie kind of stuff. I would love to see these characters come to a life.
Is there going to be sequel for this?

By: Eric J. Krause

Eric J. Krause — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 18:39:34 +0000

Very cool story. Makes me want to know much more about this world.

By: Sam

Sam — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 11:03:19 +0000

Oh goodness Em, this is amazing. Wonderful sequel, perfectly executed. Loads of little details and very well described characters, the world you have created feels almost real. I did love that, “Come in out of the nether” line – genius!

This world and its characters deserve, IMHO, to be a full length novel – I would willingly pay good money to hold this world in my hands. *wraps hint round half a brick and chucks in Em’s general direction*

By: Diana Maus

Diana Maus — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 05:41:15 +0000

ooh, shades of Rocky Horror! loved it!
— again Emma, your atmosphere is palpable.

By: ~Tim

~Tim — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 21:58:31 +0000

Well, being sent into slavery seems a bit harsh for a single misdelivery. But I like the world you’ve created.

By: Dana

Dana — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 19:58:19 +0000

Aww man – poor guy. Worst way to get a pink slip.

I enjoyed it – good fairy tale style tone to the prose.