This Friday Flash is a sequel to last week’s “Sale or Return“.
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“32a Cotswold Drive.”
Cob double checked the address on the envelope. He looked at the mundane house in front of him and then strode towards its gate purposefully, whispering the melodious spell of openings. The wrought iron rippled in front of him, he took a deep breath, flipped the latch and stepped through.
There was a moment of roaring in his ears, like he had plunged into a pool of water, then silence. The road noise disappeared and the Other house stood in front of him. It bore a close resemblance to its anchor, as was to be expected, so he let go of the breath. The first part was done, and happily, there were no hounds, or worse, in the garden.
He walked up the path. All of the windows were shut and the pale silver sky above him was empty. He pulled on the bell chain. No barking, howling or screeching. Marvellous; he’d be back at MacDonald’s within the hour.
A tired, coat hanger of a man opened the door; thin and crooked. “Yes?” he sighed.
Cob showed him his left palm. The shopkeeper’s identifying mark sparkled across the creases of skin. “Delivery from the Emporium of Things in Between and Besides,” he rattled off quickly.
The servant nodded. “For the mistress. Come in out of the nether. You can wait in the parlour.”
He was led into a cosy room with an impressive collection of bronze hearts mounted on the walls, some large, some small. Cob wondered if the mistress was a sculptor. He hoped she was.
The door was shut behind him and locked. That was standard practice in these houses. They couldn’t have delivery boys poking around whilst the servants went to find masters that might be hundreds of miles away. He dropped into an overstuffed chair next to the fire and relaxed.
Something landed on the floor next to him and he peered over the arm of the chair to see one of the mints from his pocket rolling across the wooden floor. He leapt up to hurry after it, but it seemed to speed up, rolling under the door of a small cupboard in the corner.
Cob bit his lip. Should he leave it there? What if it got mouldy and the owner found it and then realised that her dry old servant would never eat mint imperials? She’d complain to the shopkeeper, and he couldn’t risk that, not after the last mistake…
He checked for fairies hiding behind the hearts, pulled at the round door knob and the door swung open. The light of the fire didn’t penetrate far in, and the mint wasn’t anywhere to be seen.
He stooped and leant in; still no sign. A step further, then the door slammed shut behind him, hitting him hard on the backside and sending him tumbling forwards. He landed in a pile of books, coughing in the dust filled cupboard. He took a moment to orient himself, looked for the crack of light from under the door and was surprised to see it to the left of him. Convinced he must have pitched sideways in the fall, he struggled to his feet and hurried out as quick as he could.
There was grass beneath his feet. His head snapped up to see a bright blue sky with plump white clouds above him. He span around in time to see the door click shut and then fade into the tree behind him. He hammered on the trunk, desperately dug his nails in the bark’s crevices but there was nothing left of it. “Stupid, stupid!” he yelled at himself.
He was in the Other world.
He turned and pressed his back against the oak tree, panicking. Beautiful meadows, alive with dancing butterflies stretched all around him as a warm, gentle breeze caressed his cheek.
It didn’t seem so bad.
He saw a copse of trees ahead, sprinkled with poppies that bobbed merrily in the breeze almost like they were fingers beckoning to him. He walked towards them, recalling the sight of a poppy in the shop only that morning. Perhaps the shopkeeper knew someone here who could help?
The poppies snaked in a haphazard line through the trees, forming an impromptu path for him to follow. He stuffed his hands into his pockets and began to whistle. He felt the letter and struggled to remember what he was supposed to do with it. It didn’t seem important any more.
He glimpsed a figure in a clearing and headed towards him, wondering if he might be able to find… find what exactly? He couldn’t remember, but continued anyway.
A tall man with long black hair and obsidian eyes was watching his approach. He was dressed in elegant clothes that looked old fashioned to Cob, yet not out of place here. The poppies clustered about his feet and some were twisted around the man’s elegant cane.
“Ah, delivery boy,” he said cheerily. “Here at last.”
Cob nodded and held out his left palm out of habit. The man waved it aside with the dismissive skill of an aristocrat.
“You have a letter for me I believe?”
Cob frowned, that didn’t seem right. He pulled the letter out and peered at the words. “F.A.O. Lord Poppy” was written on the front in the shopkeeper’s elegant hand.
“Are you Lord Poppy?” The man nodded, taking the note. Cob waited as the seal was broken and the message read.
The lord clicked his fingers and a scowling fairy popped into existence at his shoulder in a shower of poppy petals, a thick silver band around her left ankle.
“Well done boy, you’ve just made your last delivery,” he pointed at Cob’s ankle and the fairy sighed. She whispered something that made Cob’s head pound. A cold, heavy silver band was forming around his own ankle. “A new slave,” Lord Poppy smiled. “Just what I needed. That shopkeeper really is a marvel.”
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Ooooh, well done, Em!
Wonderful continuation of the tale. Loved the description, the voice, the twisty end.
That is one tricky shopkeeper. Marvel though he might be.
That is one clever shopkeeper – knows his employees as well as his customers.
Great sequel, Emma.
Spooky! This story twisted around really nicely and coiled right into a sneaky little ending. I’m even more fascinated with this shop than I was last week! Thanks for sharing this! ~Olivia @simplyolivia
Any idea where this shop is? So I can avoid it under any circumstances? Brilliant sequel. Can we have a third one?
Heike
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Oh yeah, that was spooky and really interesting! That was a brilliant sequel. I loved both stories. I find this world very fascinating and would enjoy reading an entire book about it.
The delivery boy gets his punishment. Perfect sequel. I loved the imagery of the man with the long dark hair and cane in the field of poppies. You’ve left a lot of doors open with these two pieces and could make a novel of it if you wanted to. There’s so much here and I’m curious about these characters. I sense you know much more about this world than is revealed here.
Genius! I never saw it coming!
Ack! Poor Cob. I love the imagery in this, Emma. It has the suggestion of a very interesting world.
I was silently screaming “Leave the mint to mould!” So many wonderful images and turns of phrase. Poor Cob. His employer knew him only too well. Love the worlds here.
Wow. Everything comes full circle; eh? I had a feeling that the mint rolling away from him wasn’t coincidence. Nice job.
These are really wonderful. So many details that make the story. You’ve done a fantastic job.
This was cool – I, too, like the image of the man in black with poppies twisting around his cane.
So many things to love about this charming and imaginative story.
If I had to pick just one line as a favorite it would be “Come in out of the nether” … hee hee hee
Karen :0)
This is fantastic Em! I love this world you’re building, and as others have said, would enjoy reading a novel of it. I do hope you’re working on that?
I really enjoy the spooky feel to this tale, and the descriptions are marvelous, but the one that I like most is the “coat hanger” image of the man who answered the door. Perfect image.
More more more please!
Have to agree with the others, this is such a wonderful, wacky, magical world you’ve created! Each sentence was just like a new opened door leading us deeper and deeper into the tale. Really looking forward to the next installment!
Nice follow to the first story. “Sale or Return” is a stronger story, but this extends the magic and adds more flavor to the world. And it’s fun, too.
Aww man – poor guy. Worst way to get a pink slip.
I enjoyed it – good fairy tale style tone to the prose.
Well, being sent into slavery seems a bit harsh for a single misdelivery. But I like the world you’ve created.
ooh, shades of Rocky Horror! loved it!
— again Emma, your atmosphere is palpable.
Oh goodness Em, this is amazing. Wonderful sequel, perfectly executed. Loads of little details and very well described characters, the world you have created feels almost real. I did love that, “Come in out of the nether” line – genius!
This world and its characters deserve, IMHO, to be a full length novel – I would willingly pay good money to hold this world in my hands. *wraps hint round half a brick and chucks in Em’s general direction*
Very cool story. Makes me want to know much more about this world.
I think that your writing is really breezy. I stumbled upon your blog and I thought of reading the first paragraph of your latest post but I ended up reading the whole story. I think that you should seriously write a novel and submit it for a made for movie kind of stuff. I would love to see these characters come to a life.
Is there going to be sequel for this?
Excellent, excellent, excellent Emma. Love the coat hanger man and the description of the sky. What a lot of world you’ve fit into 1000w!
Loving this series!
coathanger man and come in from the nether!
Excellent stuff, and I’m loving this world.
Poor Cob though, that’s quite a harsh punishment for a misdelivery!
LOL Now I wasn’t expecting that! Well done